Thursday, February 16, 2023

The Suffering by M.J. Mars

 

“It was a suffering like no other. And, oh, how they suffered.” 
Recreating the séance that led to the infamous Victorian Suffering massacre seems like a good idea at the time. But Kyle Birbeck soon discovers that the ghosts his distant ancestor banished into the walls of Brackenby House in 1876 have been lurking, waiting for a chance to come out.

One by one the 5 terrifying ghosts latch onto each of the students who reside at Brackenby, preying on their deepest fears: A 3-eyed Incan giant. A member of the Hellfire Club who struck a deal with the devil to keep his fortune in the afterlife. A thieving factory hand who fell to his death, torturing them with endless footsteps. An oracle with a horde of dead sailors to do her bidding, and a 17th century axe-wielding executioner with a murderous hobby.

It’s up to Kyle and his friends to uncover the real secrets of the séance and banish the ghosts for good. But they soon come to realise it isn’t Brackenby House that’s haunted. They are. And the ghosts will stop at nothing to continue The Suffering…


I was first attracted by this gorgeous cover, and the synopsis intrigued me.
Starting off with a séance in a haunted house on Halloween is right up my reading alley! I was all in from the start, but for me, things moved way too slowly after the spooky beginning. It felt like a long time before things really picked up again. I think this could have been shortened by 15 pages.
I enjoyed the ghosts and their backstories more than I cared for the living characters.
The writing style wasn't always engaging and often pulled me out of the story because of it.
Example-
"He'd sat up stiffly in bed, thinking about the creepy laugh that sounded as though it had come from his pillow area."  "Torturously, he hadn't been able to stop imagining what it would be like to hear again."
You may enjoy it more than I did but this one was just not for me.






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